Choosing the cut
as my piece is one continuous shot i need to choose which is best. i have 7 takes. I will make notes on each take to make my decision
take 1
starts with practice goes
mask puting on a bit sloppy
drinking bit off
tuft of hair on mask (looks wierd)
exit not smooth
take 2
touches mask when comes towards camera (not big issue)
plant hanging off coat
dropped coin clumbly
SO FAR BETTER THAN 1
take 3 camera tilted up
issue with leaf whilst stacking
stick infront of rocks
dont see coin flip
take 4
light on top of door on
closes before puts on mask
still stick issue
tuff of hair on mask
knocks trolley
drops coin
WORSE THAN OTHERS
take 5
still issue of light on top of door
stick issue still
issue with the rock stacking (stumbly)
tuft of hair (not too bad)
COIN FLIP IS COOL
take 6
no issue of light
stick less in front
massie in frame (can cut out)
BEST OUT OF THE TILLTED CAMERA
take 7
not sure about prayer bit
knocking over stones want natural
actions feel rushed
I LIKE THE DUST - MAYBE ADD IT WHEN BIBLE DROPS
Take 2 vs take 6
Framing : 1. tight- feels personal but lose details of face higher not always in frame
2. always in frame but have to do more with editing (masie face)
objects : 1. more obvoius and close
2. flowers hard to see
Frekin stick : 1. hanging off coat
2. infront of camera (both annoying)
hanging off coat is easier to play off
actions : drinking is more difficult to see in 1. also bible thrown out of frame....good thing ??
coin flip drop in 1
coin flip better in 5
dont mind coin flip ....................hate the stick .......................
think 2 is gonna be my answer, this issues are less obvoius to the viewer. more just for the frantic director
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